Lol...my first thought upon seeing this was "Wow, she looks like a 'gangsta bitch' that could do some serious ass-kicking!"...hee! xD; I think it might be due to her facial features and expression that made her look so tough. I think her nose shape/size contributes a little to her looking rough? Also, the curve of her mouth ends up looking like she's either pouting or sneering at you. That may be why. And this is totally nitpicking- but I would say the edges of her eyebrows is too thick and square, so it ends up making her more manly.

But what I really like is the pose you had her in...how she has her back turned but she turns around, noticing something. That's great. ^^

I hope I don't sound too critical, because that's not my intention at all. T_T

Gangsta bitch? That's great^^ heheh, although I'm sure she COULD be one, that's so not what I was going for ^_^ heheh, no worries though. This one didn't exactly come out how I would have liked. It came out better than v 1.0 but it's still...weird, in my opinion. They style's a little more flowy but yeah, she's still rough -_-; She was supposed to be exhaling some smoke which is why the expression on her face is so weird. She definately seems pout-ey to me*nods* And the nose, er yeah. I've been fond of that nose lately on all my characters I'm embarassed to say it but it's probably my nose that I'm drawing on her I have that bad, bad habit. Next up on the list, Nao gets a rhinoplasty I also think the manlyness might have a lot to do with her jaw/chin line...it's very round and I find very....early Tsukasa-esque? Mayhaps Aladdin?(wow where did THAT come from? O_o; ) but yess, yeees, will work on these things

Hehe, don't worry about sounding too critical Especially when I've asked for you to be I like hearing any sort of critique (good or bad) so I can know which direction to go in^_^ So don't worry about offending me or anything

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